Hello! As an essay from MR.Dignam on science I will write about what I learned this week, and give a little piece of my story that I’m hoping to finish my rough draft of it today. So here’s my work! I learned that you should not start a sentence with the same word over and over again because first of all that’s not proper grammar second of all it gets a little annoying in my opinion. Here is a little bit of my story:
The mega farm
Once upon a time in a far far far far far very far away land there was a twelve year old boy named Jake Lewington whom wanted the world’s largest farm. One day he was scratching a lottery ticket for his mom and the deal was if he won the 3 trillion dollar jackpot with the card he picked he would be able to keep half of the money….. Then one day as Jake was scratching a ticket and got three 7’s in a row as he scratched the last circle he was very nervous and excited because at the time there was a 75% chance of winning then he got the whole family to watch him scratch the last circle then…..
I like the strategy tv show producers use where you have to watch the next episode to see what happens! I think that’s a really good strategy because it encourages you to watch the next episodes or season. Know just so you know I am not allowed to scratch scratch tickets because it’s illegal to buy them if your under 18 years old but in the story it is legal. And that’s it hope you enjoyed!
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