Day: November 23, 2020

Hello once again! In this part of the day I learned about a few more things so here you go!

I learned that making my story too long will cause me to loose an audience so I decided to limit my amount of words to 2,000 since I already have about 1,500. I fine that once I start writing my final draft of it I may end up with 2,050 words but that not the end of the world, as long as I don’t go to 3,000 words.

I also learned that if I don’t pay attention to my curer when I’m writing on my computer I waste a lot of time. 🙄

Then after that I learned that by planning what you are going to write before you write it you can get the job done much faster.

Since I am trying to catch up on my schedule for science I won’t give another part of my story so the end!

Hello! Here’s what I learned in science today!

I learned that by giving your main character weakness, strengths, and qualities it really gets your viewer to care about the character.

Then I learned that by reading other students or other random people’s stories it helps me to think about ideas for my story.

Although in one of my past essay’s I said I learned why it’s important for the main character to have an enemy but I learned that I also have tp describe the enemy as well as the main character’s or else whenever the bad guy comes in it wont be to interesting.

Here is another chunk of the story now remember this is only my rough draft.

 At the party Jake’s friends were all there and he offered to both of his two friends named Tyler if they would like to work on the farm in return for a home on the property. Tyler with an E said he would go as long as he fought to drive the biggest tractor New Holland makes which is the T9 628, and Tylor with a O said he’d certainly go if the property had some hunting land. The following day after the community held a celebration party Jake had bought a property that had 200 million farmable acres and 500 hundred acres of swamp and bush. But that had taken his 1 trillion and a half dollars then secretly all of Ontario came together to give Jake another trillion dollars to pay his employees and to buy buildings and tractors. But then the next day the top ten most popular tractor brands had sent Jake an email requesting that they would be his youtube channel sponsor since they knew he would need a lot of tractors. Since Jake really dislikes John Deere he said that he’d pass on them. Jake answered to Massey Ferguson and asked if they would work out a sponsorship so Jake could also be sponsored by CASE IH and Kubota. He then asked the same thing to Kubota and Case IH as Massey Ferguson agreed to this contract. Sadly CASE IH did not agree but Kubota did so Jake moved on to his fourth favorit brand Fendt and they took CASE IH’s spot on the sponsorship contract.

So Then I learned that it is way more important to have an enemy in your story than I thought.

And that’s it!